[kannon]

Split. Kind of a weird piece to me. Call to Action being that everyone should be nice and get along, but that's kind of as far as it went for me. We'll all be happy once we all just are happy. I dont know, man. I feel like it's a great idea with absolutely nothing behind it. There is no idea of how we should all get along, or what steps to take, just that Al Qaeda and ISIS should kiss. I mean, it kinda falls in line with the topic, we should all enjoy the moments, and stop killing each other to do it. It just kinda seems like a solution without an explanation. And you know how when you were in school, if you solved the math problem, but didn't show your work, you got points knocked off...

timeless. What would make an invalid poll? Also, I'm confused as to why they gave him a salad bowl. Okay, so dude gets fired. Goes home and drops acid. Kinda strange that you went from being "relaxed at home" to finding a penny on the pavement somewhere. I don't know when you left the home, but you were on acid, so it could have been any time. I like the lemonade stand bar. And the first handful of bars were a dope set up for your character. probably explains why he was fired. I'm still a little unsure why the office took a vote on it though. that doesn't seem to be a thing a manager would do. Have the office vote on whether or not someone gets fired... Anyways. Overall, this was okay. Not awesome, but not bad.

This is actually a really tough one to call. I feel like both had their moments, but both lacked a certain UMPH to really round them out. I think this is going to come down to a matter of preference...I just think I have to edge it to timeless...