[Adonis]

Patrick - Stellar start in diction to start, although I didn't much like "Plus E". Seemed a bit cheap. I loved the the concept behind quick swipe wasting more time then saving due to auto correct, shows you were actually thinking while writing instead of just saying shit to say shit. The verse was fun, but somewhere in the middle grew a tad stagnant but picked up again in the end. I considered doing a verse nearly the exact same thing but from the perspective of an old man, but realized my lingo might not translate to everyone here from different parts of the world. I liked this verse though stylistically. Thought it was a witty take on topic and was executed nicely, but again, the fact that it felt stagnant at one point would be my only qualm, which is a big one at that.


V - You packed this verse to the brim my friend, it's damn near over spilling with concepts and references. I enjoy that style of writing because it truly shows your are thinking while you're writing and pushing the envelope. I will say however, there were parts where the rhyme schemes fell flat and simply missed the mark. While I appreciate the knowledge dropped, it was a bit difficult to read due to it's choppiness through out.

Close battle. If I can be honest, I liked them both and felt each had low moments.

Voting Vulgar

Pat had an equally dope concept, but I can't get passed the depth or meat to Vulgars while comparing the two.