wow. really impressed with pans verse, u delicate little flower u. lol, u fancy fuckin poetic emo faggit this was really fuckin good!~!!!!!!!!! u r a great writer, the way u handled this with skill and finesse was really impressive. this wasn't so much a rap as it was a beautifully written story with exceptionally good imagery. you can really write. wow.
greed i appreciated your verse for what it was, especially in relation to the topic, but unfortunately for you pan just flat out outwrote you here. your verse would have beaten about half of this weeks field i think, but it was just a tough matchup for you this time. keep doing what you're doing in terms of the writing but try to come up with a more interesting idea on the topic next time. writing about killing ppl is obviously just played and boring. there are way too many good writers in this league, and to use such simple idea's against them most likely won't get the job done. good potential though just try to go deeper next time
Vote: P Bizzle
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