Greed, I liked your little reimagining of Eminem's Brain Damage; it was a cohesive effort from beginning to start, if not in terms of flawless mechanics and wording, specifically grammar, then at least in tone. PancakeBrah, this was subtle in terms of imagery and allusion; the kind of verse that dances around in your neurological pathways on it's tippy toes. Top-notch. Vote is for PancakeBrah for executing to a higher degree and for possessing the noble quality of deli***y.
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