I believe you are an alter-ego of the Jesodist, if not my apologies (hopefully this analysis will still stand). We think in a similar way. We use the English language in a similar way. Perhaps you could benefit from learning to become more flexible in your choice of language. Less condensed jargon, more connecting and signposting words, limit yourself to clearly expressing one central idea per paragraph. Please consider to write more simply, you will improve considerably in accessibility if you attempt to tone down your language and density of ideas while still addressing this same subject matter that enthuses, motivates and invigorates you. You have a really definitive and interesting almost disjointed writing style, I wouldn’t like you to lose it or drastically change it, just to refine it, clarify it and simplify it. Experiment with it. Then when you can write simply and with a clear singular focus, then you can re-introduce complexity of language and density of ideas.
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