On the phone so sorry for the quickie vote
Soul- really impressive writing here. Strong use of vocab on display. Ur rhyme structure is complex but yet also free flowing. Ala frank a bit. Ummm tbh this shit was too abstract for my taste. I honestly don't know what the fuck was going on. Maybe it wasn't abstract. More vague is the right word. Sorry I personally don't wanna have to Sherlock Holmes a verse to understand it. Bhutto ya props on the writing and vocab. Top notch
Witty. - Loved what u did here. I like spinning stories and looking at them from a different perspective. U also made them more gritty. Which was dope. The rhyming and flow was really good and for such a long verse I was never bored. Impressive stuff here
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