Soul I didnt know wtf you were talking about on the first read through. On my 4th read through I saw a intricate story of a stalker who would never approach his target due to personal insecurities. Yet, on my 5th read through I feel that he is either dead already, or she has aids. Okay, 6th read through and im pretty sure they were together, and then they both died. Im suddenly very invested and would seriously like an explanation. Lost me at points.
Witty that was cool, for some reason I thought you were going to kill snow white again so that was a nice twist. Straightforward delivery but solid storytelling.
Gonna go with my initial choice
V witty
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