good Battle guys.
copy - sick verse here. real fluid. easily read through with no hiccups. I liked your take on the topic and how you went into all the common addictions. word choice throughout was stellar. Full of technical goodness as well.
vulgar - great vocab in this. the imagery i found is what stood out to me here. some real decent rhyming in here as well. some of the lines i felt were a tad long and didnt flow perfect, but nonetheless this was a great showing.
ive gotta say this was a really good battle, both writers rhymed really well and told great stories. This vote will got to whom i felt the story was stronger and was a little more enjoyable to read. sad to have to pick a winner, but....
v/copypat
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