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Old 10-17-2014, 09:46 PM   #6
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Sick bro, just nasty, killed it with the wordplay! I like to think we have someone similar styles from this drop anyway...but ur vocab is waaayyy deeper than mine, and so it the content...I like to use similar wordplay, playing words of others a lot, I really liked this...often times when u find something with content and extremely inteligent lyrics, bars are often too long or its just difficult to read bcuz it just doesnt flow smoothly...I would have to agree tho, some of the best shit Ive seen on here...only somewhat negotive thing I can say, or constructive rather, (and Im really picking here to just try and give u something, cuz it was pretty much on point throughout) is maybe even throw a few more simple shit in there ya know connecting shit, or leading into bars, and it couldve even flowed better...like I said tho, I had to pick cuz there wasent shit wrong with the flow at all...thats just really all I saw that MAYBE wouldve made it better...sorry for the novel, Props tho homie!
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