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Old 10-15-2014, 05:56 PM   #14
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PG first line was dope. The second part of the second line was a bit of a lack of a punch IMO.

Defiant's post was evil. The first line didn't really form a sentence if rather was used as an adverb.


I'm gonna vote against the norm here, and say Defiant's lines were more offensive and attacking. Voting more on content, rather than structure... this time.

/v Defiant
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