I love this so much dude, a personalized trip to hell, heaven and earth. However
"Thawed to the bone flat under a new phoenix heatwave.
Deemed the sun was trouble as soon as I seen it eat cake.
I had to move fast, had to destroy the giant star.
If I don't, I'll be forced to lose weight, and a diet's hard."
I think I may be missing something here but I'm not sure what these lines mean like neither my left and right brain is recognizing the relationship between your word choices in these 4 lines. Could just be me. Still this was dope, enjoyed it muchly. Keep those creative juices flowing!
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