Tic's was structured much better than Step's. His wording, np, and impact were all organized in a manner Step wasn't necessarily able to match. Step, my advice would be to reevaluate your choice of wp i.e. can-deeese and its positioning. Also, you had a solid lead-in to your closer, but the payoff was tame and didn't do the creativity of your setup any justice.
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