I wouldn't be surprised to see both of you later on in a contenders/championship match. Not surprised at how close this one is. 3PA, what you wrote has to be one of the most cleanly, written piece of the season thus far. Very impressed in your rhyme scheme, your selection words and the depth at which you went. Many stellar lines which I can't even begin to touch on. Frank, as usual, you gave us what you always have done, and what you do well more than a lot of writers. Your creativity knows no bounds, the descriptions/details you manage to put together is always great to read. I truly enjoyed reading both verses. As good as they were they had their minor tidbits, and my vote comes down to who stuck out more. Indeed, 3PA had the better written piece, full of deep concepts and thought provoking lines. But for me it is missing something. It reads as a very, very well written topical but it could have used a bit of life in the creativity department, in terms of an overall idea that I can visualize. While on Frank's end, he could have used much tighter wording/rhyming, but beyond that, the setting he put together and the story he told was creative and entertaining. And that was my deciding factor. But stellar job by both of you gentlemen, indeed.
MVGT: Frank. Good job by both competitors.
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