[theMuzzl3]

couldn't relate to Blanco's post... plus, bad run-on sentence on 2nd line (not voting based on that).

Jiliti's punch lines could have been better, and I am surprised Bishop did not come up with something better. Jilti's lines could have been better, too.

Both were decent as far as rhyming and structure. Jilti's lines didn't rhyme perfectly, but the content seemed better... however, doesn't look like Bishop is an Indy fan. Jiliti's first line threatened Blanco directly, and then followed up with a line about him shooting Indy's linebackers. Bad follow up.

Blanco's structure was better. He started out cleverly with the "no hatin", and the 2nd line was the "knockout punch".

I felt both could have done better.

/v Bishop Blanco