again another good topic that really didn't get the verses i was hoping for to come out of it..
greed had a pretty solid verse, technically. the flow was good, vocab ok etc. but this was basically just a flex, felt like an om drop. i can see how it relates to the quote but damn.. so much more coulda been done with it
inno - rushed ur shit again... that aint gonna cut it. there just wasn't anything here, im sure u weren't expecting anything with that drop though? i guess props for not no showing but this didn't really help ur cause anyways..
Greed did just enough to win which wasn't much to be honest. you wrote an ok verse but the relation to the topic wasn't fully hitting..
you both are gonna need to step it up going forward. if u get matched up against one of the vets they'll crush efforts like this
V:greed
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