View Single Post
Old 10-12-2014, 01:35 PM   #4
NYCSPITZ
SYRACUSE
 
NYCSPITZ's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,031
Battle Record: 31-37


Champed
- Write Night II
- Alias Topical Tournament

Rep Power: 4743547
NYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant futureNYCSPITZ has a brilliant future
Default

ImPissedallthegoodnamesaretaken, this is a great verse my friend. I got a sort of "insouciant prep school" vibe from it due to the bunsen burner cigar and nobel laureate lines. Reminded me of that movie starring that kid from a clockwork orange (well, I guess he's dead or way older than us but...immortalized in those movies he's a kid imo). Cadence, multies, philosophical connotations (drinking in ether -woooo hot!) were all there in abundance.

Second verse is dope. an overly idealistic, somewhat spiritual take on saving humanity. The folly of impetuous youth. If it hasn't happened for thousands of years why would synthesized drugs fix anything? Stuck in the rat race of power, a noble ideal loses itself to apathy. Ending line was dope too.

Keep the pen moving young kangaroo

and yo.....

give this shit a real title my G
__________________
UNIFIED THEORY
NYCSPITZ is offline   Reply With Quote