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Old 10-12-2014, 10:20 AM   #5
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Greed - was feeling the flow as always. Fast paced read, but you did jump around a bit. From speech on podium to roof top shooting at the ceiling. To looking at a girl sleeping, to spitting in a cypher. This however, did fit the topic really good, I just wish it had more cohesiveness.

Inno - some good lines and some not so good. For being short you would need next to no errors to win.


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