Kannon verse was humorous, especially the revelation of the appointing of homecoming king to be the fulcrum of the story. A nice succinct verse. However, even with the witty humor of it all, it still did not have the qualities that NYC's had. NYC language eloquently elicited a more captivating and riveting effect.
The rhymes and images that he etched onto his stanzas were quite stunning, to say the least. The narrative based off olden times, in which the meaning of combat and valor is portayed as fighting for an ideal, rather than personal desire was well done.
VOTE: NYCSPITZ
Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 10-11-2014 at 11:32 PM.
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