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Old 10-11-2014, 10:37 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by StepTo. View Post
..i'm basically rhyming words and then mushing dumb shit inbetween them.
i've been doing this on the last couple things i've posted here on Open Mic. trust me, it's not a bad place to start. you just have to hopefully turn "dumb shit" into "clever shit" or "interesting shit" or "funny shit" or "sad shit" or "intriguing shit"... get it? basically turn the dumb shit into something that makes a reader feel, think, or react.

oh; and the rhymes have to be good.

i'm not saying that i pulled it off, or that it's easy. just trying to help.
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