Holy fuck, dude. What the hell could I say about this?
Extremely fun read, rhymes were ridiculous. The stream of consciousness had a great link in between each thought but every tangent was fully-formed and totally relatable. I love the commitment to the character... the only break from the tone was the "cerebral" line.. after reading the whole piece, that seems a bit out of place given the voice. But that's a tiny drawback, this was fun as shit to read and massively impressive. Good shit, homey.
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