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Old 10-11-2014, 06:15 PM   #15
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NOTE

I don't budge when old fucks push my patience, eyes low and seethin'
You're mentally weak and lack energy, kid. So as hard as you try, you can't move me like failed Psychokinesis
Good bar. All around except flow dipped a bit in quality at the end
A stale pile of feces is more "The Shit" than you'll ever be
NOBODY FEELS YOU, and it's CLEARLY not because we lack empathy...
simple but nice bar, haven't really see cats reference empathy as much.
Your efforts are never seen as effective with lines parallel to these
And from the Right Angle, Not Even Hypothetically
I get the science of this line but it doesn't really sting as much as the other two. It's decent.
Don't need a Long Thread to prove he's Bitch-Made, so this punk stays nervous
Cross Dressin' like Christian Women at Sunday Service
Didn't like this line, punch was too played, and the connectivity attempt was too shallow
Lift your skirt, and I see that you ain't from the hard-knocks
If you've ever seen Sham Rock, it was probably in your Lucky Charms Box
decent bar all around. Funny but it's not the freshest concept.
Get laid Face Flat on the Ground for exuding some ruthlessness
Put your Up-Side Down like Odd Future did to the Crucifix
Nice line. Almost up there with your opener.
I'm the God of this rap shit. Your crew gets throttled for breaking my sole commandments
If you Gruesome Intellect, you'd be Smart Enough to not follow your Man's Sin / Manson
Your best bar! I never seen the gruesome WP, dope shit.
But, copycats reenact mistakes... So, it's best to Zip It Up before you catch the Body-Bag treatment fast;
Free At Last! Like Martin Luther's speech "I Have A Dream" before the heater-blast...
pretty good closer.

GAMBLE


This homos whack... I'll merk em in seconds, once I choke this fag?
Ill Carry Note across the Bridge before The Drop like I was harmonizing in Vocal Class.
woa! Fresh concept and dope for how it connects on different levels. U take the opener
I sever this fag, once I step on a track I'm sending him fast
Let's face it u were nvr good at text,Book.. Mayb if u read 1 in class ud b better an pass.
flow was ill, concept was simple but very effective.
This faggot couldn't save the strength to make a grade. Try an sway an pay.
Cus If this lame complains....... I'll have Bookmarked for tryna fucking Change the Page.
Didn't like this. At all. I feel note takes this bar easily.
Once I step on this Note, they'll be nothin left to expose
Ill stab this bitch w/ an effortless poke,
.......................... Pull out a Key and Peele his wig back faster than a Sketch on the Show
very fresh creative line and the flow was cool impact was good. Dope bar!.
This fucking delinquent will suffer once I cut an I rip shit.
Keep frontin w/ a Hard Cover, Book...... N end up on the Edge of a Destructive Condition.
merely decent
This a David vs Goliah an I doubt seeing this pest fight
.................... you'll see him Jet from facing a Giant... Like this was Preseason @ MetLife.
decent bar. Really like the setup but the punch being played takes away from it.
This kid is worthless, n U don't wanna meet in person I'm very violent
Show your mug, & end up getting ur Face Bashed..... worse than The Roast of Paradigm.
ok bar
U might consider this Peer Pressure when I drop Notebook.. this cocks Over
So ima Hand u ur first L u seeing on the Sight..... like Medical Marijuianna for Glaucoma.
not the freshest line but it's still worded in a way to be solid.


I think gamble had the more creative lines but note had the more scientific lines. It's a tough battle to vote on but I think gamble edges this out due to lines that stood out a bit more in terms of creativity, impact, and set up.

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