[Mr. J]

Muzz, I will admit that you come off as a better writer the more used to your style I get
maybe it's the different aspect of how you approach your verse that puts me off since the first round
but you seem like you actually have a little skill to what you do, you just choose to over complicate things
either way you rode through your verse without any pressure which shows...
not the best verse due to it's plot holes but you held your own here...nice drop

Witty, Always a delight to read your verse, you came through more coherent then your opponent
and you really tried to tap into the reader's mind as the verse progressed
my only issue with this is the ending, which I found interesting, but didn't quite like
but I did enjoy the verse, it was smooth from the flow to the transitioning
the "bleh" at the beginning, either blended with the story...or you weren't feeling the topic
either way I feel like you did your work as far as your verse went, nice work

v/Witty

I feel Witty just came prepared to win, Muzzle needs a little more work...editing would help
but talking about what you should have done in a verse isn't acceptable unless you're in the OM
which you aren't....nice battle fella's