This was two people?
A lot of the rhyming seemed so effortless... those are always the best reads.
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he tugged at our strings, but it was his being pulled.
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That's a fantastic line.
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That’s when he started to realise whoever controlled his commands
had mastered the art of propping him up, while holding him back.
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Again.. holy fuck. Super slick.
This was pretty close to perfect. I have rarely seen anyone be able to create such empathy for a character as here. I was actually sad for the poor dude, lmao. The phrasing, the rhyming, the story, the emotion.. everything was bang on. Great read, thank you.