Wasn't the last time you two battled the quickest battle to open in the history of the league? Well I think it's fair to say that records broken by this battle lol.
Zygote: This week your drop started off slow and I kinda didn't know where you were going with it, but then about halfway through I saw where it was going and I gotta say really a great piece. The lines saying the machine wiped out the planets because they didn't know the value of paperclips was kinda chilling tbh. Really cool that an AI developed a consciousness and the only thing he wanted to do was make paperclips. Truly original idea and as far as your mechanics and rhyme scheme they were what I expected from a zygote piece. Great job man.
Frank: Damn. This piece has got heart man. Poor ole Larry. Great story really and it kept me locked in from the beginning to the end. You paced the story along at a constant rate without stuttering and all along using your vintage style. My favorite part of this was the second stanza. Damn near flawless piece really.
Ok I know I typed more on my breakdown on zygote's verse but I'm going with Frank because honestly his verse left me speechless. There will be no better battle than this this week so I'm saying it now BOTW. Props to both of yall.
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