[PancakeBrah]

""if you think you conjure it"- Mr Rogers with a ouija board,
I'd have never guessed beneath the vintage cardigans
sleeped an armored demon lord"

kek

"crash into miserable,
abstract and cynical. distraction pinnacle- you'd have reworded it.
that's the Split Eight steez, and in complete seriousness-
welcome, and stay please, he's not paid to make these appearances
at the attention deficit, ten-eighty HD experience."

dope, dude

This was cool. Different from your usual style. Although you've written like this before, and have a few styles under your belt. But this was definitely a different structure, with an emphasis on longer rhymes and less syncopation. Probably using that word wrong but whatever. A lot less dashes and semi-colons! You get what I'm saying. I also liked the opener. I can't really recall the last braggadocious type piece. This wasn't really THAT, but had more of that slant to it, definitely. The 'watch' run-on thought was cool, clever. I think I do prefer the more 'Split Eight' style writing but this was good, and kind of refreshing for a change of pace. Your knack for vocab was there, not overused but strong nonetheless, which is what is preferred.

Thanks for the read.