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Old 10-07-2014, 08:40 PM   #7
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Great read. Great theme. I feel this is good poetry. Your vocabulary is excellent, and I had to "google define" a few words. I think "affection" was supposed to be "infection".

My interpretation is its basically a love poem about a girl who you parted ways with. Emotion spews upon the lines with several concepts, all going towards the theme. The ending lines signified to me that you saw either the same rose or another, and looked back with a newly learned experience through emotions you went through.

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