I knew this would be a tough battle to judge based on how talented these guys have proven to be. I loved PG's omission of "nigg". Had he of kept it, it would of either been distracting or considered a reach, but by wording it the way he did, he challenged the reader to think ab the entire concept (which he alluded to in the set up). Nice concept and execution. MS constructed his bar very well. The subtle hint with "gunning for dames" as it relates to the closer was a perfect choice of wording. The grenade/rpg wp/np was all supported efficiently by the concept. The concept was just as dope as PG's. I really don't see any difference in creativity and concept. Both had a np. Both bars were structured ideally. If I had to go technical the only thing that I see where one might of had a slight advantage with execution would of been PG.
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