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Old 10-06-2014, 04:13 AM   #12
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Timeless

Wasn't keen of the verse half of the verse, some of the rhyming was weak and the verse didn't really connect, the second half was dope tho IMO, sound of condoms splitting to the end I liked it.


Mr j

I didn't really like the way you went with this, it started nice, I didn't mind the twist but the verse all together was better. It was more of complete verse



The second half to timeless verse was the best thing in this battle but I think mr j gets for being decent throughout, not just getting started half way through



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