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Old 10-06-2014, 04:05 AM   #16
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Inno

I dunno I just couldn't get into your verse, I've seen the short line verse thing done before and it works but I just feel I struggled to keep interest in your verse, the story wasnt strong, the flow was good at points tho


Dove

I liked the verse, this woulda been one sided if u completed your verse, no real ending but the verse read real smooth, the last 6 lines were dope I think just wished you continued the verse


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