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Old 10-06-2014, 01:04 AM   #12
Pinot Grij
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NYC, I guess the president was sent by Satanic priests? I don't know man, I found it hard to follow... this reads nice but on closer inspection, it just comes off as window dressing... "chanting in possible code" "their arms spread in perfect synchronistic domino mode" "tundra and silence" "skeletal variance" "feral in management"... like, most of that stuff makes zero sense, but when all put together it sounds nice enough.

Objective.. this was pretty played imo. The angle, the delivery - it all seemed very basic. They were rhymes from like a late-80s rap star ensemble track trying to get kids to believe in themselves.

Vote for NYC. I found a lack of coherency in some of the stuff you said, but on pure technical execution, you demonstrated more skills than Objective who came with something far too simplistic to garner a vote... and I'm sure he's able to bring it harder than that.
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