Netcees - View Single Post - Week 1: NYCSPITZ vs. Objective [NYCSPITZ wins, 9-1.]

Pent uP · 10-06-2014, 12:45 AM

Nyc - pretty solid. Little bit of misdirection but overall pretty predictable. Less solid than your alias work. Nothing really to say about this piece...it was a setup and execute kind of deal and you did that.

Objective -- this was boring to me. Grammatical mistakes and weak rhymes made this a chore to get through. The message in this wasnt anything special and the effort behind it felt flat. Not much to take away from this

Vote nyc

10-06-2014, 12:45 AM	#11
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	Nyc - pretty solid. Little bit of misdirection but overall pretty predictable. Less solid than your alias work. Nothing really to say about this piece...it was a setup and execute kind of deal and you did that. Objective -- this was boring to me. Grammatical mistakes and weak rhymes made this a chore to get through. The message in this wasnt anything special and the effort behind it felt flat. Not much to take away from this Vote nyc Last edited by Pent uP; 10-06-2014 at 12:51 AM.