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Old 10-05-2014, 10:37 PM   #14
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it seemed like Woosah wasn't totally in this & spent very little time & made it more than 2 lines on purpose.

YDK lines were good. I looked up "woo" and then realized he was using Woosaw's name as"who saw". I don't know how you fit in these short "middle lines" -- your style intrigues meThe last line could have rhymed better.

Not much more to say.

/v YDK
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