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Old 10-05-2014, 10:36 PM   #9
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Wow I gotta say I'm impressed with you kannon I never read a topical from you but I really enjoyed this verse man. Definitely had a strong an controversial subject that you used well along with a easy to read flow an the humor at the end was a nice touch. Overall a solid drop an prolly my favorite read in the past few weeks.
Split I felt you either didn't care this week you were rushed or tried waaayyy too hard man lol Ive seen a lot better from you in almost every piece I've seen in the past year but this stop an go cutback rhymescheme doesn't do your style or verse justice man.

I gotta give my vote to kannon this week in an unexpected blowout imo
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