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Innovator - Different structure this time around, cool. Trying out different shit, or just went along with something that could fit to the picture because you didn't exactly know which route to take? I'm asking this because I see you describe the picture rather than making a more complete story of some sort. Either way I enjoyed the first 5 sentences well.

After the first 5 sentences it sort of got a little bit worse. The sentences didn't seem to make sense to me. ''ad lib comet surround sound. City in my head about town.'', what? After that it gets progressively better again and I somewhat dig the easy going adjective sprouting shit you come forth with.

Thought the verse as a whole was cool beside of the part I mentioned.

Dove Dozer - Decent intro. I can sense some storytype verse coming along. Mechanically shit was cool, but I would have appreciated the story to be developed a bit more if you're taking this route. I mean, the content of what you were selling wasn't really enough although the rhymescheme was pretty dope and what seems to be the start of something really great.

Vote - Kind of hard to pick one of the two as I feel like this battle is really close. I enjoyed Inno's more abstract take on the topic a lot but it's somewhat hard to understand what he's getting at here and there as certain sentences seems rather incoherent to the message its trying to convey, Dove Dozer got a pretty good flow going and what seems to be a pretty cool start for a story but the story itself is rather underdeveloped. A lot of questions goes un-answered in his.

If I got to which of the two I felt was more solid than the other overall it got to be Dove Dozer. Ye, my vote goes to Dove Dozer.