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Old 10-05-2014, 12:35 PM   #5
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@Pent uP I read it so I figure I should say my short thoughts. This verse as usual, highly descriptive. The seasons made for a nice touch, and the emotion surrounding this verse was extremely serene. This entire week wasn't all that great regarding top notch verses from the league, but I think this one, copy pat and Certain and nyc were the only real good ones. You connected me to an emotion rather character, something your good at. In the end though, it didn't feel revealing, or lacked a sense of...."wow" or "it's all wrapped up". Good shit though
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