[Adonis]

Copy - Witty take on topic for sure. Thoroughly enjoyed the approach and wew, you brought me back to like freshmen year or something like that. In the PJ's I grew up when played that shit hard, even had someone blasting guns in the background of the first track I ever recorded. Anyways, sidetrack. you kept true to what you going for which is impressive. Even more impressive? I never grew bored. The verse from start to end, I'm sure because of the connection I have with your chosen content, was alluring and intriguing and held my full interest. The rhyme scheme was nice as well, but the weaving of the play was the highlight. Dope verse.


Pinto - I liked the humor and the spin on Video games. It was in the same vein as a Mike Wrecka verse against me. This was a solid read. Decent flow and pace and execution was there. Unfortunately Pat used a style that combated yours perfectly. Well yours was more humorous, his also had a good twist and execution, only slight edge in writing.

Voting CopyPat