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Originally Posted by Vulgar
An Unveiling
The courtyard where poltergeists leave dirty messages on walls (they cosign me)
She’s a Humphrey Bogart damsel with a serious shortage of emotional content
Holding beads, cloves and sieves - idyllic masks crafted from foul operas
Her head’s pounding with headache 'cause she detached her crown chakra
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those lines stood out to me as the creme of the crop. Loved seeing some of the traces of your old style. Seemed to be a synthesis of story-based narrative and historical imagery.
For me, it sounded like a handservant trying to make someone from the royal family presentable, proper, without sacrificing their panache. Coupled with a dude on a blind date trying to get a handle on this girl. Combined with a guy thinking about his flirtatious/ promiscuous girlfriend, who he doesnt want to lose that primal attraction to but at the same time is worried that unchecked she's gonna do her own thing right out of his arms
All of these laced into one another, smoothly, without ever coming into one resting state. it was like hippyflipping your problems into a sleep state
Always enjoyable. thanks for the read, Vulgar.