timeless - pretty decent verses. i though the concept wasnt really defined, so the story hit as hard as it couldve. it was good, just lacked a bit imo. flow was pretty solid.
Mr. J - i like what you did here. story was pretty good, rhymin on the other hand wasnt super strong. however you wrote a good story, and had some nice lines.
this battle is interesting to me because timeless had a nice flow, and vocab. while Mr J brought a stronger story.
gotta go with J on this
V/ Mr J
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