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Old 10-03-2014, 06:49 PM   #5
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Now this was a refreshing battle from the start to the end
I enjoyed both verses a lot, and the fact of the matter is
I'm going to have to give it Copy based of his memorable piece
I feel like the idea is so fresh to the league since I've been around
and I'm glad to see him improving on his skills by focusing on topics
rather than play around with paragraphs, and random rhymes...
although I do believe he's always had that comedic edge on his verses

as for Pinot I felt like your verse was just as hilarious as Copy's
you had a slick vibe and the technicality of your verse was infectious
the vibe was smooth from the start to finish and it made i worthwhile of a read
you deliver some great work when you put your mind to it, and this match-up
well this match-up showed a certain clash in styles that very few seem to share
had you went of on a tangent I feel that you would have had a very...
very....verrrrry close battle, but Copy slightly edged this one out your hands
very nice work fella's...

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