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Old 10-03-2014, 12:30 PM   #7
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I liked campbell's more on this. better storyline, a bit more engaging. Nice little backdrop to the story and cool insight into the woman's psyche and her relationship with the man who drew her picture.

YDK was pretty cool but not as tightly wound together as campbell's imo. Wording was also slightly less effective.

v/ campbell
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