YDK's setup ran a bit long, and that kind of took the sting out of the 3-line punch. It was direct and somewhat statementish, but that actually played in his favor since I had no idea whatsoever what Woosah was talking ab. I read the bar a cpl times before the explanation and then I googled Danity Kane and it made a bit more sense to me. But the setup didn't feel related to the closer other than the WP and DK tie-in. The delivery wasn't that bad. I was able to pinpoint the flow and go with it. As a whole bar with proper setup and concept support, I have to go with YDK.
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