Simply put... this... was...very...well...written...
Now,
Question... I was going to start quoting stuff etc... and realized "The chap just dropped back to back great lines"... and then it started declining towards the end... and I was going to comment on this "dropped off" etc...
Then,
Digressing back to my question...
I thought - maybe this was the whole meaning of the piece... a continuation into nothing concluding in:
"never mind im done"
If so,
Brilliant.
Well written. Hopefully you are not done. We write for us, not for a reply, we write for us and sharing in the hopes someone will give us feedback to help us grow in expressing ourselves.
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