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Originally Posted by theMuzzl3
Your words are helpful, but I tend to disagree with the blah rhyme blah part. Playing with words should be wordplay and it shouldn't be limited to some fixed structure… all though I do see your point and I will write lines according to those structures, more often.
"limits to the room" referred to limits of space within the womb (or in this case, limits to members taking up space on netcees). It was word play and metaphorical. I'm surprised no one got it. Giving him the broom would represent kicking him off of the site, or his mother giving birth to him.
I guess leaving shit open to interpretation is not so able to be done here…. giving someone the broom means giving them the boot. Limit to room refers to him being too big to be in the womb, or to fat to be on nettles.
In conclusion: I accept my loss without any hesitation, that votes were based on content without discrimination. I did have two lines in my head at one point that would have gone over well, but I was on the toilet with no pen & paper.
@ BROKE LESNAR @ Camp Bell |
You assume there's no limits to the room. Okay that clears it up somewhat. What you're doing is using topical metaphors in a text battle format. Which isn't going to work. And I've never in my life heard of childbirth being referred to as being given the broom. I think it would work more in your favor, since you're trying to be a better rapper and translate what you're doing in text to what you will be doing in audio, if you did AOWL. By all means, you don't have to take my advice or anybody elses, I could give a shit if you do. Alot of ppl don't take advice anymore. They just find an excuse to negate it. So I'm not surprised. But I will tell you this, if you don't compromise, you will lose every single battle on this site.