I got the drive and hunger to succeed
I got the killer instinct to make you all bleed
can't no body hinder my progression
I am really chill, but I can get with the agression
class in session, the best in, the world.
your bitch be like whose that dick?
but she be on it, doggonit, it's Patrick
This is dope bro. I really like how you rhyme things. Like suceed with bleed. And progression with agression session and the best in world. That dick it's Patrick. That is fire son. Content is not so complicated that I can barely read it. Keeping it simple, not raising too many expectations, it makes me feel really comfortable reading line to line because I know that my mind won't be too confused by any of it. Thinking too much is for school and not a hit song in my opinion.
It's actually something even a terrible rapper like myself with weak little girly lungs, could possibly rap to on a really slow instrumental or something. Makes me want to live vicariously through your lyrics. Much doper than all this other nonsense that would never really get play
on the radio or youtube or whatever.
Also I second on the audio.
Keep it up bro.
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