Really dope. I like the positive vibes in the first two parts which is real refreshing from most of the depressing shit that is on here. I generally am not into pieces with these types of schemes because I have an attention span of a six year old and I abhor looking things up in the dictionary, I feel like it's giving up you know what I mean bro.
But you managed to keep my attention all the way through the end so that is real impressive.
However the ending line for me doesn't feel like it fits at all. It's almost like you decided to just phone that shit in for the last line after three verses of consistent illness
"is love crafted from wood, granite, sand or a brick
can it be foreclosed on and turned into an abandoned abyss?
uh....um... fuck it...or are my pantz in a twist lulz"
But whatever its still very dope. It made my wiener hard.
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