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Mercy · 09-26-2014, 04:08 PM

this was decent. I liked the emotion and imagery but the lyrics were a bit basic. Try using some more multi's and internals. I can definitely help you with them if you'd like the assistance, I'm always a pm away. stay up dude, this was pretty nice.

09-26-2014, 04:08 PM	#4
Mercy Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 26 Rep Power: 0	this was decent. I liked the emotion and imagery but the lyrics were a bit basic. Try using some more multi's and internals. I can definitely help you with them if you'd like the assistance, I'm always a pm away. stay up dude, this was pretty nice.