[Venom]

I saw this more as an vocab/rhyming exercise than a topical.. the latter I consider to be more story based. not that I'm complaining. I'm a big fan of maintaining multis if/when possible, so to see you exhaust the fuck outta one was nice, haha. I know some people see it as a negative, and they have a point because you did seem to be forcing it a little towards the end, but I'm fine with that.. others might not be.

the storytelling aspect did seem rushed, with the ending being a bit "what the..!?" but again, while others might see that as a drawback, I see it as fitting to the situation. Dave just killed a bunch of people, Stan's head is gonna be racing.. heat of the moment shit, I dunno. I thought it was ok. my only point would be if you're gonna rush one aspect (the beginning or the end) then the other has to be more established, so I would've liked some more background/situational stuff on Dave.. driving to the airport, getting on the plane, thinking about what he's about to do, etc. just to situate the audience for the wtf bit, rather than the whole verse being one big wtf.