[theMuzzl3]

up jump Muff Diggity Dig-it, He can't Hang
Rappers Da-Light type, they call him Sugar in his Gang!!

(8/10) -- its hard for me to give a 10. But, it flowed fairly well. I know you're referring to Sugar as suga-momma or something, but sugar would make him quite heavy… if it was taken that way. Over-all, good lines; lines 1&2 weren't really the same punch (or line 2 wasn't a continuation of punching based on line 1), but it was good.

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Keep up with hygenics..dude its just simple
The last chick to Pumpkinhead ended up repulsed, scared n refused to continue

(5/10) -- The over all message was very good. Line 1 had me cracking up. The 2nd line was a bit long in comparison to the 1st line & didn't really follow up with the same clarity of line 1 but was creative. Simple & continue don't quite rhyme, but close to rhyming can be ok.

/v Kin