I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes!
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ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit
get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs
so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit
just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in
Profit: You had good direction, I feel you lacked with creativity and execution.. seems you took the simple approach which can work at times when the wording is top notch.. A lot of potential in you just get more creative and step out the box a bit.
jilti: Had some cool wording, had 2 solid lines, I feel you need to just keep it more consistent and try to get alil creative also.
v/Jilly
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