Cool beat, cool verse. I like your mic presence but I think there wasnt much variation or range in your delivery. Song was a bit too busy with words, but it's a hard balance to maintain.
Verse with the blunt full of kush/dub/ I was made for this/ alcoholism lines was DOPE and probably the best ratio of content to lines. Keep your songwriting at THIS level of lyricism.
Give more time for the beat to develop between verses. Showcase some of your producer's talents and let the music and words harmonize on an aesthetic level
good shit man
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